Sunday, February 17, 2008

Noa's Writing

Not very often does Noa choose to write stories unless for school but tonight she wrote us a goodnight story. I copied it exactly how she wrote it so you can see her writing progression. She was very proud of her story and her use of the exclamation point.
Bedtime Story
Once thar was a gril named Avery. She was the best. She like ice cream in her birthday and birthday cake of course! Her moms name Annie. Her sistr name was Noa. She likes dogs. She likes buttrflies. She likes donkeys. She like princesses. She livd in a clon (clown) home. Her chairs wer clon homes to.
Love Noa

1 comment:

For Intimate Gatherings said...

I love your story, Noa. Keep writing for us!